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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
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0 posted 2000-04-07 11:46 AM


yea i know i've posted this one before but it's one of my favorite ones so i figure'd i'd post it again and let those who haven't read it read it.  So you you go.


Thoughts run through my head
I feel so lost, almost dead
I can't control them they're all around
They're takin' over my mind and no comfort can be found
I don't know why they invade like they do
I only know they start with you
Why do they come ony at night
When I lie awake and sit so quiet
They rade my mind each time i think
Afraid to loose them i refuse blink
But in the morning I will wake anew
But I will have lost my thoughts of you
---Written by:Hoppy

11-20-99  


 "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it."
Henry David Thoreau

Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't live...you might die.

© Copyright 2000 Hoppy - All Rights Reserved
bulletproof2312
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since 2000-03-31
Posts 28
Beaumont Tx, 77707
1 posted 2000-04-07 05:27 PM


I'm glad you re-posted this since I wasn't here before. It's great,
*Peace*
Skye

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