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Stuck In Your Heart

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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden


0 posted 04-07-2000 08:56 AM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Allysa

In a silent darkness,
all around you it falls,
You twist and turn,
but there is nothing at all.
You're standing with a crowd,
but sounds don't emerge.
You guess it's from the hate,
you just had to conjure.
And you wait,
for some way out of this place.
For an escort, and angel,
with a smile on their face.
And you wait,
you try to move to the door.
Only then do you find,
you are chained to the floor.
So you wait,
to hear them silently converse,
as they all try to find,
a way out of this universe.
Your crys,
they fall among deaf ears.
The people ignore you,
with their own faults and fears.
I guess, you sigh,
sinking to the ground,
my crys will be answered,
when my heart is found.

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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


1 posted 04-07-2000 12:36 PM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

This is sad and lovely, thank you for sharing it with us.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

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2 posted 04-08-2000 01:19 PM       View Profile for **Angel**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for **Angel**

This is a wonderful poem. I love the expression in it.

Keep it up.

Lindsay
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3 posted 04-08-2000 04:12 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

Your word usage and melancholy tone combined make your poem a sad but beautiful picture of the human soul. Good work.  

Meredith

 *There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)

Allysa
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In an upside-down garden


4 posted 11-08-2000 03:59 PM       View Profile for Allysa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allysa

thanks ya all. just adding this to my library.

Morning rain fell on my window, and I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


5 posted 11-15-2007 07:43 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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