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Leviathan New Member
since 2000-04-07
Posts 3 |
My second poem(I screwed up on the first one). I am a teenager, There is no one like me, I have many faults, I am oly human, Yet I feel like much more. I look in a pond to see my reflection, Yet I do not see me, I see my friends, They are always there for me, I thank them. I feel stress, I have fears, I've felt love, I've felt hate, I've experience pain. I am always there to listen to you, Yet you never talk to me, Do you even notice me, Of course you don't, And it is all my fault. Why do I feel nervous, Why do I get scared, Every time I am near you, Everytime your nearby, I run away and hide. I am a teenager, There is no one like me, I have only one life to live, Because I am only human, Yet I feel like much more. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
hey, nice poem, really expresses what you are trying to say well. Welcome to passions. Keep up the good work. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I know what you mean, you express it extremely well. Great post and a warm welcome to Passions! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Awesome poem. I couln't of said it better. You've expressed what every teen experiences in life. Keep up the good work. Isa |
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