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angel6917
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0 posted 2000-04-05 06:24 PM


You know what has happened to me,
you know I need my time.
I know you really like me,
I see that this could be a sign.

I finally found someone
who likes me for me.
I really like your patience,
and that you'll wait for me.

No one has ever looked at me,
in just the way you do,
and I'm suprised that you're so patient
in trying to get your message through.

~Kristi Lynn
(Okay, I know it's kinda cheesy, but Grady was there for me when everything happened with Nate, and now there is something more, but he's letting me move at my own pace before we get anything serious started.)


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DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-04-05 07:36 PM


nah, I think it is a sweet poem Kristi. Grady is a lucky guy to have someone as sweet as you. Hope it all works out for you.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


dazed
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since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
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2 posted 2000-04-06 03:53 AM


I didnt think it was cheesy LOL
I liked it!!

4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

3 posted 2000-04-06 09:17 AM


it's not cheesy...it's sweet
you're lucky to have such a great person in your life

i liked the poem

BEC

 "tears are the essence of our souls"


ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
4 posted 2000-04-06 10:51 AM


Hi Kristi Lynn! I am really glad you found a nice guy like Grady after your disaster with Nate I wish you all the happiness with Grady!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


12eH7AeH6
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since 2000-03-28
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5 posted 2000-04-06 11:33 AM


Very nice poem!  This really special girl i know is in a similar situation...But i just hope that this girl doesn't give up...Because i know that the guy would die if he were to lose her....keep posting...and i think you should give this guy a chance....
angel6917
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6 posted 2000-04-07 10:56 AM


Thanx all for your replies.
Sam~
I hope this all works out.  He's being so patient with me- he says he wants this to work out, too.  *Big Smile*  
Dazed and Bec~
Thank you both for your sweet replies.
Lizzie~
After Nate, thank God I found someone decent.  And to answer your question to Jennye, yes, that is the Nate I just broke up with.  But she can have him.  
12eH7AeH6~
Okay, your name took me a bit to get, but I got it now, I think...  Anyhoo, I am going to give Grady the chance, and I'm glad to have found him...  
Love ya'll,
Kristi Lynn

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