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hoppy
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since 2000-01-27
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0 posted 2000-04-05 04:48 PM



Bubbles
Bubbles gliding down from heaven tonight
Glistening in the pale moon light
World's reflected in the orb
In the orb how simple it must be
A bubble cannot hold something of complexity
Down they all fall plump and bright
So brilliant they appear in my sight
I'm trapped in the bubble, look and see
Oceans of orbs shining up at me
How soft they seem touching ground so rough
I bend to touch the sphere of chrome
But it popped and life is gone
-Written by: Hoppy


2-1-00  


 "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it."
Henry David Thoreau

Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't live...you might die.

© Copyright 2000 Hoppy - All Rights Reserved
dazed
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since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
USA
1 posted 2000-04-06 04:14 AM


Good Poem!!
Dana

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-04-06 07:14 AM


This was fantastic~
I liked it very much~
Tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks


4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

3 posted 2000-04-06 09:09 AM


this is great! i love it! the whole bubble and orb thing is great! this is going on my wall!!

keep up the fantastic work

Bec

 "tears are the essence of our souls"


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