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DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2000-04-05 12:13 PM


First off, I was asked yesterday to write a poem for my school's paper, so, here it is  

A cold wind blows through,
It's shoulders carry winter's fury,
And the animals stay warm,
Hidden deep in their den.

The white blanket is folded,
Stored away for the year,
And she takes her shower,
Winter's last grip washed away.

The birds, they sing,
As colors spring,
And the animals,
Come out to play.

Sprites come and dance,
The trees decorate the sky for them,
And the fields glow with life.

The world brightens,
Things look up
Everything calling cheers
Spring is in the air.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


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natalie
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 56

1 posted 2000-04-05 03:06 PM


wow, you really get the spring feeling with your poem, I like it, Hope the weather will be like in your poem,
natalie...

dazed
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since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
USA
2 posted 2000-04-06 04:39 AM


Great Poem DragonFang!!
good imagination too!!
~Dana~

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
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Limbo
3 posted 2000-04-06 04:51 AM


This is a really nice soft poem. Nice detail and beautifuly written.

~AF~

DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
4 posted 2000-04-07 12:30 PM


why thankie all of ye. I do hope the weather looks like it too... at least the last part   Heh, and imagine, I wrote it in health class cuase I got bored.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

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