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The hour has come
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
The this is now, There is no turning back, I has have shead my tears, Faced all my fears, Yet I am empty inside, Why in this day, Why can I not fade, Fade into the night and become one, I am not dumb Just hurt and upset, I have no regrets, I know what I must do, Only I knew what my life has been through, A new day has arrived, But I recensile, To the dawning of a new day, So I go to pray Seeking strength from the one above, He decended like a dove, When I have my strenght, I will test my fate, I will survive, Or will I fail, I think this to no avail, My Journey is imcomplete, The is a terrible feat, I will face it, Face it alone, This is my walk, This is the hour that has come For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
well for now I am going to stop writing because I think I lost the gift to write so for awhile now I am going to take some time off to find something that I have been looking for. I am looking for someone to love when I find that I will return but for now I can't write like this For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Great poem. I am sorry to hear that you are going to stop writing for a while but I know what you mean. Sometimes I feel the same way. I feel like I lost something and I just don't feel inspired anymore. I am sorta going through that right now actually. I hope you find that love you are looking for. Lindsay |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Hey I thought that was a good poem!! Anyway usually when I cant write, My life is going great...I usually write when I got a problem or something is bothering me ,its my way of dealing with it I guess... Dana |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
i thought your poem was really good. i like the way it rhymed. anyway i hope you find the love you are looking for. i know what you mean about not being able to write. i have a problem writing when i'm happy usually. so lately i've written tons. i hope you find love and that it stays with you because we all know it hurts once it's gone. so, yeah, that's about all i have to say. email me if you want to madonaa8@yahoo.com Tara |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Awesome poem. I totally know what you mean that's why i haven't been on for awhile. But i still don't have anything but i wanted to check out how everyone else has been doing. I wish you luck in finding your love. Just don't look too hard you may not find it or at least that's what i'm always told. I do hope to see you come back. Isa  |
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