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Jimmy
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 42
Oak Grove

0 posted 2000-04-04 11:32 PM


Dreaming of Love
>As I sit here, dreaming about the one,
>the one I Love Soo Dear,
>The love that is now gove,
>The love that is no longer here.
>
>I can only think it was all me,
>I made us be this way,
>Why could I not see,
>Everything was not o.k.
>
>She says im controling,
>Im keeping her on a leash,
>My heart is unrolling,
>My heart beat is fading just to say the least.
>
>I do not know why,
>I do not know where from,
>Inside I must die,
>I can not ask how come.
>
>I miss her soo soon,
>It has not been that long,
>Eternity is in bloom,
>With out her to go on.
>
>I can not be away,
>I can not be so close,
>I can not make her stay,
>In my life she means the most.
>
>Will she come back,
>Will she be mine,
>It's her love that I lack,
>Will my sun shine.
>
>Will my day be here,
>Will my love be with me,
>Will our destiny be clear,
>It's her love that I need.


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Thomas Jono
Junior Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 25

1 posted 2000-04-05 01:33 AM


i like this poem you wrote. it tells me how much you would care for the one true love you tend to find..i support you to it..anywayz, very nice poem, good work, and continue on writing for they are very touching to most people.. good luck with you..

Thomas Jono

AngelShell
Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...
2 posted 2000-04-21 03:22 AM


There was a 20 day gap in between your last poem and this one, I hope that you were ok in those 20 days.

Keep on loving her but don't make your self even more miserable.

Love Always,
Shell

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