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She's The One
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She's The One |
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Thomas Jono Junior Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 25 |
She's The One She’s a nice and thoughtful person, With a heart of a thousand words. She’s a friend that is from heaven, Who brought me a nice group of golden birds. She shines through the endless sky, So brightly in the naked eye. Through the misty clouds ahead, I see her eyes, face, and lips so red. She’s different form any other girl, So shy, innocent, and funny. She’s like a shiny precious pearl, That is worth quite a lot of money. She's the moonlight that glows through my window, She’s the nice fluff that’s in my pillow. During my sleep she appears in my mind, When I wake up, It’s her I try the find. |
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shaheen Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 16Denmark |
nice poem. reading this poem I think about my lovely dream... anyway NICE WORK!! Nighthawk -Mumba- "Their is an island of opprtunities in middle of every difficulty!" |
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Thomas Jono Junior Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 25 |
thank you for your comment..it really brings up your lovely dreams? that's good.. Thomas Jono |
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natalie Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 56 |
wow, I wished someone wrote or said this words to me, but well that's not the case, so... thanks for this poem, it's great natalie... |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
This is such a sweet poem. Every girl wishes some guy would say or even think this way about her. I really like the rhymes and it's a really good poem. Thanx for letting us girls know there really are nice guys out there! Tara |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
My thoughts mirror Tara's!! Thanks for sharing this with us! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight." |
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Thomas Jono Junior Member
since 2000-03-30
Posts 25 |
Thanks you guys for the wonderful comments...i know for a fact that there are guys out there who are like me...i know you will find some guys who would do this...again thanks and good luck... |
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