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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 2000-04-03 12:32 PM


Baby blues gently flit
Regal purples softly prace
Spicy pinks now flare
As the silver moonbeams dance.

Navy flows with silken grace
And golden yellow flies
Hues of aqua lightly flow
As misty whites do rise.

Peaches quietly feather
As brightened rose does soar
A brilliant rainbow born
With tints and shades galore.

A paintbrush lightly smeared
With softly gleaming dew
Strokes the pale horizon
With gentle color renewed.

<font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~</font>



[This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 04-19-2000).]

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Astraea
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California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
1 posted 2000-04-03 12:51 PM


Beautifully done, Alwye, like always!  I love rainbows.

By the by, I'm back!

Okay, I'm done.    

~Astraea

[This message has been edited by Astraea (edited 04-03-2000).]

Dusk Treader
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2 posted 2000-04-03 01:17 AM


Cool poem, Krista!  Cool little description of each color of the rainbow.  Fun read  

 Abrahm Simons

"...Watching fate as it flows down the path we have chose" - Trent Reznor, "We're in this Together"

ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
3 posted 2000-04-03 04:41 AM


Beautiful!! This poem was a true pleasure to read....all of your poems are!! Glad to see you back in here again!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


Comfrey83
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since 2000-04-02
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4 posted 2000-04-03 11:22 AM


that was fantastic! the one thing that often goes amiss in this room is good poetic devices and good metaphors but you nailed it. really, fantastic job
-Andy

Alwye
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In the space between moments
5 posted 2000-04-03 09:47 PM


Thank all of you very much, I truly appreciate it!

 *Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
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6 posted 2000-04-03 10:40 PM


It be nothing, I enjoy reading ur poems. I enjoy everyones poems. *shrugs*

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


Crystalina123
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7 posted 2000-04-04 12:01 PM


I liked the poem, beautiful imagery.

-Crystal

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.

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