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Jessica182
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since 2000-03-20
Posts 15


0 posted 2000-04-02 06:42 PM


I long for more of what I

think I can't have

I need you more and more

You're all I love for

My survival relies on your love

it's something I can't verbalize



I miss you

even though you were never really there

Do you even care?

This really isn't fair

Why must you deprive me of the only thing I really knew

Is this really the best for you?



I am in a bottomless pit

my love is something you'll never get

why do I want to be with you if I hate you

I am stuck to you like glue

I need to let go



What I feel isn't what I say

I wish it would just go away

But the feeling is here to say

for I found out I love you today



I can't sleep

throughout the night

I try to fight

it all through the night

I can't let you out of my sight

I just don't know what's right

I try with all my might



When you swallowed your pride you choked and died

you acted as if you were the one that was unsatisfied

as if you had tried

as if you had to decide

you LIED

as if all that matters is your side

you acted preoccupied

I don't feel justified

This time I decide



For you I'd lie

For you I'd cry

For you I'd die

For you are the perfect guy



I wanna fall in love so bad

for love is something I wish I only had

When touch is inferior

to what you feel interior

thats when you know you must go



I have to leave you,

We are definaly through,

I can't think of you,

I don't love you,

I trusted you



*~*~*~*~Jessica*~*~*~*~*~*

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Comfrey83
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 36
Winchester, Mass USA
1 posted 2000-04-03 10:34 AM


i liked it. i find my own thoughts drifting to love that doesnt exist alot. it can be depressing how we make our own dillusions.
-Andy

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-03 02:02 PM


These are all lovely little poems. So full of emotion. Your love will come along when you truly are ready...you'll know when it is come to you.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


**Angel**
Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

3 posted 2000-04-03 04:42 PM


Hey..excellent but sad poems! This really made me think because I am sorta going through the same situation right now. If you want to talk about it please email me at
send_lindsay@hotmail.com

Thank you

Lindsay

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