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Dear Father
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Dear Father |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Why do you drink your life away stop and stay with me be the Grandfather to my children not just a grave stone or the man in the picture I need you in my life dear Father please come back bring back my Father the onewho's not always drunk who phones me crying about his life Without alchohal I would still have a Father who lives in the same house as me and I would have had the Father I wanted the Father I should of had as a child a father to protect me from everyone who would hurt me a father to show me that not all men can hurt me a father to be there for me Your not that father boose is my father and is slowly taking him away from me Day by day he dies a little how can you sit there and leave me the way you are Don't leave me alone in the world I need you to hold my hand hug me when I need comfort I need parents not just a parent Don't leave me father I love you too much |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is an incredibly sad poem. I am so sorry that alcohol has done this to you. Welcome to the family of Passions. If you ever want to talk, my email is janetmp@global.bw Love and hugs and support, Lizzie  |
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Comfrey83 Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36Winchester, Mass USA |
i knowq what your saying, i have a alcoholic dad as well, because of this he doesnt live with us anymore. it hurts. but i still have great times with my dad does it really ruin everything about your dad? poem was great, i knew where you were coming from -Andy |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
A heartfelt plee for a father to be there, and be a father, a loving parent. Nice poem. Unfortuantely sad reality for many children. |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks guys for all your replys, I'm glad you all like my poems and that you understand the hidden meanings in them all. |
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Suzanne Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 18Florida |
wow, i understand you too well! i too have a father much like the one in your poem, only he still lives with me, which sometimes scares me. i really enjoyed that poem, and im sorry you have to go through that too. i hope things get better for you. just stay strong and keep your head up, as long as you stay strong, you'll be okay! great poem  |
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