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poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-04-02 05:43 AM


You beat me inside
don't apologize
you said what was meant to be said
your words make me drunk
and I fall into a high
sitting in clouds
trying to ignor the pain I feel deep inside me
my spirit rises up
leaving my body
so I feel no pain
only exstacy
but I can't hide forever
returning to my mind
the pain returns
emtyness
all throughout me
and I cry
don't apologize
your not sorry
you don't love me
leave me alone
I can't stand your face
the yelling begins
unhappiness
what I've learned to feel
beating me down
inside of me
killing me slowly
a painful death
violence causes my silence
and I slip away



[This message has been edited by poe_32 (edited 04-11-2000).]

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-02 07:11 AM


I am so sorry...I hope things look up for you soon. This must be so hard on you. I am here for you if you need me...don't forget that.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


natalie
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 56

2 posted 2000-04-02 03:17 PM


I hope you'll feel better soon, Such things shouln't happen to anyone,
natalie

poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
3 posted 2000-04-05 12:46 PM


This poem was actually written for people who go through abuse, personnally I didn't have to endure anything that terrible. But I've seen it too much and I wanted to write sbout it. Thanks for all your replys. Keep them coming please!!
DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
4 posted 2000-04-06 04:05 PM


Egad! That is a heart wrenching poem. Glad to hear it isn't you, now if only it wasn't anyone, the world would be much better. Keep the good poems coming, I'll read what I can when I can.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
5 posted 2000-04-06 05:31 PM


Lots of sad expression here. well written though.
poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
6 posted 2000-04-06 08:02 PM


Thanks guys for your replys, I'm glad you all understand it. Please keep posting your replys, I really want to know what people think of my poetry so please read my other poetry as well and let me know what you all think. Thanks again!!!!! Poe
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