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poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-04-01 10:20 PM


Friends

What can I do?
To make you see
I always trusted you
and never betrayed you.

How can you think, that I did those things?
How can you think, that it's all my fault?
Why do you do this to me?
Why do you treat me this way?

Do you not care for me?
Do you hate me?
What have I done to deserve this?

I can't sleep at night
I can't eat
I can't have fun with my friends anymore

Everywhere I go
Everything I do
Reminds me of you
And everything you'd do

I miss you by the hour
I miss you by the day
I can't stand not to see you
I can't stand not to hear your voice

I want things to be the same, as it was days before
All I want is my friend back
All I want is to talk
Is it too much to ask for, it was just a thought


 

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4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

1 posted 2000-04-02 03:34 AM


this is great! your right....friendships hace so many questions.

gret work!

Bec

ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-04-02 07:38 AM


I hope you and your friend get to talk things out....don't give up, there can be blue skies around the corner.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


Comfrey83
Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 36
Winchester, Mass USA
3 posted 2000-04-03 10:41 AM


its really odd how when a big relationship ends everything crumbles around it, like a chain reaction or something.
Andy

poe_32
Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
4 posted 2000-04-04 05:34 PM


This poem is actually about an old fight I had between a good friend, but it's all good now. But thank you all for your replys!!!!
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