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I'll know when my love comes along....

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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


0 posted 04-01-2000 05:15 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ESP

I have never been in love before but this is how I think it should be.

I値l know....

I値l know when my love comes along.....
He値l look into my eyes and see into my heart.
He値l smile a special smile just for me,
We will always be together, never apart.
His touch will send a surge of electricity through my soul,
I will melt into his soft and tender embrace.
My lips with his slender fingers he will trace,
So in love will we be.

The man of my dreams will never betray me,
His love for me will be so real.
I won稚 ever have to worry about being alone,
He will promise me that with a kiss as the seal.
His kiss will fill my heart and soul with everlasting joy,
We will walk beneath the stars all night.
With him everything will seem so right.
So in love will we be.

I have never been in love before,
But I値l know when everlasting love comes along.
He will always be able to make me happy,
He will fill my heart with a beautiful song.
His love will be my life long pleasure, forever and ever,
We値l dance in the moonlight- dance all night.
Into my life he will bring dazzling light.
So in love will we be.

Forever and ever, till death do us part,
I値l love him with every bit of my heart.
So in love will we be.

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**Angel**
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1 posted 04-01-2000 07:13 AM       View Profile for **Angel**   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for **Angel**

What a wonderful expression of love. Wow!
I truly hope you find that love someday.
It will be so special.

Thank you

Lindsay
LyricFetish
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2 posted 04-01-2000 03:14 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

Very beautiful. I hope I find that kind of love someday, preferably tommorrow. j/k Awesome phrasing and vocabulary, most effective. But you forgot to say 'he will love chick-flicks and never have morning breath'. Oh well, I guess perfection doesn't exist outside of Hanes-for-men underwear models. (besides, they probably shave their entire bodies....gross) Peace babe.  


Listening to my 'Human Clay' cd <creed>,
Meredith

 *There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)

kayli
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3 posted 04-01-2000 10:05 PM       View Profile for kayli   Email kayli   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kayli

right on! thats just what i was thinking...
real good


later

~kayli
Jer
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4 posted 04-02-2000 12:44 AM       View Profile for Jer   Email Jer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jer

WoW... beautifully written, and such a great thought. It's nice to see someone else besides myself has such a great idea about what true love is. Great job. Keep up the good work.

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

Michele
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5 posted 04-02-2000 03:56 AM       View Profile for Michele   Email Michele   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michele

Aawwww.....how did you read my thoughts?j/k
really,though,that is what I think all of us want.A deep,true,everlasting love.You write beautifully!!!
Keep writing,
Michele
ESP
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6 posted 07-08-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


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Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


15 posted 07-08-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


16 posted 07-08-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


17 posted 07-08-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


18 posted 07-08-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


19 posted 07-08-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


20 posted 07-08-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


21 posted 07-08-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


22 posted 07-08-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


23 posted 07-08-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


24 posted 07-08-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Thank you for the replies all of you!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
 
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