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bulletproof2312 Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 28Beaumont Tx, 77707 |
Two steps forward to a goal Four steps back- back's against the pole Every time momentum builds something pulls from behind All the dreams aare soon killed because of the lack of progress Yet somehow something happens something frees the trap Feeling is found again like someone cutting the elastic strap Fly down the corridor of life with newly feed wings Never again affected by strife no longer bogged down Freedom is a new thing a feeling of escaping In the sounds of singing rushing down the hall Goal in sight, witin reach grasping out and grabbing hold Finnaly sucess is reached! ---Skye *Smile on* "Here I stand I can do none other"---Luther |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Great poem. It really made me think. You have a great talent. Thank you Lindsay |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
ah...to reach that goal i life  great feeling i like this heaps!! Bec |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a good poem. It gives a person a feeling of happiness and it would be a good poem to be used for inspiration. Also, welcome to Passions. I look forward to reading more of your work  ~AF~ What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger |
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bulletproof2312 Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 28Beaumont Tx, 77707 |
Thank Y'all so much for replying, it really makes a person happy to know that someone will read thier toughts... *Love and Peace in Christ* ---Skye "Here I stand I can do none other"---Luther |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Great Job!!! I like this poem, Alot of people can relate to it! I also like the the rhythm of it... Good work!! Dana |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a terrific poem!!! What alot to think about! Thank you for sharing it with us! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
An inspiring poem that goes to the heart of having faith in yourself and what you can accomplish. If it weren't for the obstacles, the achievement of the goal wouldn't be near as satisfying. Great job with this poem. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Hey Skye - Great poem babe! I'm 'mucho' impressed. If I had known you wrote poetry, I'd have shared mine with you, and told ya bout this place long ago. Anyway, this rocks, it's a *feel good* poem, something I never do a good job with. Peace!  *~Meredith~* *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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