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anonymousfemale
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0 posted 2000-03-31 05:31 AM


What on earth is wrong with her?
The love that he holds,
Deep within his heart,
Is enough to fulfill her troubled mind.
But she wont listen to me.
How can I keep repeating my words?
She knows that he loves her,
Her heart is bleeding bad.
The soul that is still hidden so deep,
Can still hold onto him.
Her mind is clogged up with negative thoughts,
Of what would happen if.....
If he didnt come, didn't like her,
If he didn't want her......
Listen to the ones who observe.
The ones who watch on the sidelines.
We can all feel the love he has for her,
Please just embrace the warmth that it will bring.
Remeber it is better to know,
That he will always be there.
Loving no matter what,
Devoted only to you.

This is for you....you know who you are.



 What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger



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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-03-31 05:40 AM


Dear A.F.

This is a beautiful poem. I hope your friend allows the heart and soul within her to trust the love that you keep telling her is in abundance from him.  Did you give it to her? Did it work? I hope so!!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie.


anonymousfemale
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2 posted 2000-03-31 05:49 AM


Thanks Lizzie. I am hoping that it has worked...but I know that she will always allow her heart and soul to trust this love that she knows she has.

~AF~

 What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger



Lucius Cade
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since 2000-03-23
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3 posted 2000-03-31 02:22 PM


Anonymous, as I was reading this poem I realized how much it pertained to my life. All I can say is you helped me in ways you cant imagine.
Great poem


 Lucidity is the answer to all problems

**Angel**
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4 posted 2000-03-31 02:27 PM


Excellent poem. This made me think of someone I left behind a long time ago.
Thank you so much..
Keep it up!

heart_on_sleeve
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since 2000-03-29
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5 posted 2000-03-31 07:32 PM


Very deep and spoken out poem.I don't think i'll ever forget about this poem.
                   Heart_on_sleeve

anonymousfemale
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6 posted 2000-03-31 10:05 PM


I am glad that I could have helped you with this poem. I am pretty sure that I have helped my friend too.

Thanks for the replies.

~AF~

 What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger



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