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April Resi
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since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama

0 posted 2000-03-31 04:12 AM


Please my love, please don't cry,
come let me hold you close tonight.
I'll comfort you and dry your tears,
look up at me and try to smile.

I promise you the pain will ease,
scars will fade, hurt will cease.
This pain of yours will soon be gone,
but I'll stay forever, believe me please.

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-03-31 04:16 AM


This is a really sweet poem! A pleasure to read. I hope to read more poetry by you SOON! I hope this poem helped the person you gave it to...did it?
April Resi
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since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
2 posted 2000-04-01 02:45 AM


Thank you ESP... yes, it did help him a lot. It was about my best friend in this world, my fiance. (Not obsessive, just in love... I know, it is a very thin line, huh?!)
He and his parents were really into it and a lot of other probelems with his past were creeping back. I just wanted him to know that I would be with him thru all the good, AND the bad.
A few of my friends have even used it for others that they felt similar to, and it seemed to help them also.
  
Thank you again!
April

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