Don't want to miss a thing by Aerosmith

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Teen Poetry #2

Don't want to miss a thing by Aerosmith

heart_on_sleeve
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since 2000-03-29

Posts 55

0 posted 2000-03-30 10:37 PM

Our song
Our song that fate brought us together with
We danced
We smiled
We held
We kissed
We talked
We loved each other the minute we gazed into each others sparkling eyes
This fate has brought us-from our first dance
It was 5 minutes before we would have our ride home
you asked for this last dance
"Yes" I replied
We danced close for our hearts to touch
I kept thinking this was all a dream but it was real
I never wanted to go out of your arms
I wanted to freeze time so it can be like this forever
The song ended so suddenly and everyone cleared out from the dance floor
but we stayed in each others arms,
just to dance to the love that both of us had made.
*~Heart~on~sleeve~*

ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-03-31 05:00 AM

This is a really sweet piece of poetry, you must be so in love! I especially liked the line "but we stayed in each others arms just to dance to the love that both of us had made" That is a beautiful expression.

Keep posting, I loved this poem!

Love and hugs,
ESP

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2000-03-31 05:17 AM

This is such a nice piece. It is good to see that you have foudn someone you can love so much.

~AF~

What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger

**Angel**
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since 2000-03-31

Posts 162

3 posted 2000-03-31 02:39 PM

Oh, that is such a beautiful poem. Just wonderful. Keep it up.

Lindsay (**Angel**)

April Resi
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since 1999-10-18

Posts 119
Alabama

4 posted 2000-04-01 02:57 AM

Very sweet poem!
I can't tell you how much I thought of times when I've done that myself! I am so happy that you are so in love!
Love the last line especially!!!
April

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

5 posted 2000-04-01 04:12 PM

That's precious. I'm glad you've got such a great person who inspires you to write so beautifully. Very romantic, very sweet.

Love and toilet paper,
Meredith

*There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)

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