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DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
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Missouri, USA

0 posted 2000-03-30 01:36 PM


Ten years gone and ten years back,
And still I don't know why the wear black.
We all sat around and listend to the preacher say,
"Ashes to ashes. Dust to dust."
And soon we were all thinking that way.
But if what the old man said,
Is indeed true,
Then that day was a happy day,
And shouldn't have been that way.

BTW, this also has nothing to do with anything, or anything to do with everything, or everything to do with something, or something to do with nothing, or however else you want to look at it. Just random words out of a chaotic mind is what this is, it is.


 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


© Copyright 2000 Samson C. Justice - All Rights Reserved
heart_on_sleeve
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 55

1 posted 2000-03-30 11:14 PM


Very true poem DragonFang.
               Heart_on_sleeve

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-03-31 05:45 AM


Great poem!! Keep posting.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
3 posted 2000-03-31 06:01 AM


I like your random words...they make for such great pieces.

~AF~

 What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger



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