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Selah
New Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 8

0 posted 2000-03-29 06:05 PM

I've hurt you, my love
And I am ever so sorry.

Do you remember the times we held each other?
Do you remember that gift I gave you
On Valentine's Day?
Remember the kisses I gave you when I told you,
"I love you."

I gave you my heart, you gave me yours.
Together, we were as a whole
And apart, we were empty.
You were my island of tranquility in a sea of chaos.
You kept me up, and told me everything would be ok.
I believed you. I clung to you.

But then the seas began to churn.
Suddenly I was drowning, and so were you.
We reached out to one another,
Yet neither of us reached back.
"It has to be this way," we said.

The waves made us drift
Nearer, farther, nearer, farther,
Until today, when I could barely see you
On the horizon

The sea of life will make the gulf between us
Wider and wider.
I wish it didn't have to be so.

I love you, ever so much,
And I wish I could change things.
I wish I could have those loving,
Endearing moments again.
I wish I could.
But I know I can't.

If you asked me back, I would rush to your side.
Even after everything that has happened,
I love you.
I still love you, sweetheart.

It doesn't have to be this way...

The truth will attend to itself.

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-03-29 06:40 PM

Very deep and heart-felt. Great first post. You use words wonderfully to express your feelings. Welcome to the group!

*There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-03-30 11:41 AM

I liked the line "You were my island of tranquility in a sea of chaos".
Nice writing. Welcome to Passions!

Ashiraladoni
Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 52
Duluth, MN, USA

3 posted 2000-03-30 10:50 PM

Wow, this poem struck me very hard. It sounds like my past relationship I had with my bf.
It's almost scary...and very eerie. Great poem, welcome to Passions.

Ashiraladoni

" To be free, or to be enslaved, that is the question."

Ashiraladoni
Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 52
Duluth, MN, USA

4 posted 2000-03-30 11:09 PM

Wow. This poem is awesome. It sounds so familiar, so familiar in fact it eerie.
Good job. Welcome to the Forum

~Ashiraladoni

" To be free, or to be enslaved, that is the question."

heart_on_sleeve
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 55

5 posted 2000-03-30 11:24 PM

Very deep feeling poem.Really reached out to my heart.Keep up the awsome work!
Heart_on_sleeve

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

6 posted 2000-03-31 12:44 PM

"We reached out to one another,
Yet neither of us reached back."-- exellent lines here. Great work!

*Krista Knutson*

As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins.
~*Albert Schweitzer*~

dazed
Member

since 2000-03-13

Posts 119
USA

7 posted 2000-03-31 03:30 AM

great work!!
Hope to see more of your work soon

4eva_at_heart
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 238

8 posted 2000-03-31 03:45 AM

wow!!
excellent!
this is a great first post...welcome to passions!

Bec

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

9 posted 2000-03-31 04:44 AM

This is a beautiful poem. I hope you and the one you love find your way back together once more.

Love and hugs,
ESP

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