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ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

0 posted 2000-03-29 03:53 PM

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
I wish you could love me
The way I love you.

Roses aren't purple,
Violets aren't creamy,
But life with you in it
Is ever so dreamy!

Roses aren't lilacs,
Violets aren't daisies,
Loving you so
Is making me crazy!

Roses are yellow,
Violets aren't pink,
When I hear you say "Goodbye"
Why does my heart sink?

Roses are Pink,
Grass is green,
When I imagine life without you
The whole world seems so mean.

The roses are wilting,
The violets are dead,
I thought you loved me...
Was it all in my head?

sweetcollege_girl
Senior Member

since 1999-12-03

Posts 872
just about where I want to be

1 posted 2000-03-29 04:27 PM

loved the poem ESP. It makes sense...Is love in our head? Or in our hearts? Or both at different times in our lives??? Love is confusing..but confound it..you can't get away from it

great poem

stay cool

~~Lavada~~

"For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin

shaheen
Junior Member

since 2000-03-27

Posts 16
Denmark

2 posted 2000-03-29 06:28 PM

You missed this one:

roses are red
violets are blue
imagined me and you in your bed
but that never comer true

roses are white
and that's right
I can't see a light
so I may fight
...for you!

I'm just kidding.

Just one thing, my beloved girls name means Whiterose, therefor I love whiteroses best. Pure Love.

What is the signature of this college girl?

your sincerly
Mumba

"Their is an island of opprtunities in middle of every difficulty!"

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

3 posted 2000-03-30 03:22 AM

ESP
This is wonderful
Good job
Tracie

<!signature-->
Roses are red
Violets are blue
This is a great poem
written by you

<font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
</font>

[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 03-30-2000).]

4eva_at_heart
Member

since 2000-02-12

Posts 238

4 posted 2000-03-30 06:29 AM

the roses are blooming
the violets alive
love like the flowers
will continuosly thrive

great poem.
i'm sure it wasn't in your head.

Smile

Bec

heart_on_sleeve
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 55

5 posted 2000-03-30 11:51 PM

Very beutiful poem.Your right about the roses and your right about the violets.Great start on an classic starting line.
Heart_on_sleeve

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

6 posted 2000-03-31 03:14 PM

This was really well done. Like the way you ended it.
I was thinking after reading some of the other responses, that you could make an interesting challenge for other poets using the roses and violets as lead words.
just a thought.
Nice writing.

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