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The Ultimate Crush
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The Ultimate Crush |
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*Nene* Junior Member
since 2000-03-15
Posts 16 |
I wrote this poem a year or so ago. You see, it's just a crush That's why I think of you so much Or maybe it's the way you walk and talk Your smile and your glance That throws me into this trance I like the way you hug As though you don't want to let go And then there's that special smile That only I know But you see it only a crush Nothing more....unless You tell me you want me And end this distress |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Nice poem I think. You have the reader believing its only a crush until the very end. Welcome to Passions. |
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heart_on_sleeve Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 55 |
Very cool poem.Crushes start to be crushes but then end up on how it did at the end of your poem.Keep up the awsome work:> |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
How very true. Your poem speaks much of vivid wisdom. Congrats of a poem well done. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a terrfic poem!!I hope you feel part of the family at Passions now, we are glad to have you here. Keep posting!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Isn't it the truth?!Crushes are always so innocent and great but they end up being more. You simply can't stop emotions. Great poem. ~AF~ What doesn't kill you only makes you stronger |
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