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MelBear
Junior Member

since 2000-03-26

Posts 29
Imlay City, Mi

0 posted 2000-03-28 06:36 PM

Hey everyone.. I thought it would be fun to see how we could all make a poem.. so add a line or two and lets see what we get!

(MelBear)
If you look into my eyes you see pain.
If you look into my chest you see heart that no one can tame.
(LyricFetish)
If you look into my hand
You may see this gun
But if you look into this world
You'll find I'm not the only one
(Lucius Cade )
I wish I could just live or die,
No hardships, either way I lie
The truth lies for me somewhere
Hoping my life I shall spare
(Mellon Collie)
if you dare to probe my mind
be wary of what you may find,
for innocence when given time
may prove to be the fatal kind
(angel6917 )
This life of mine
I wish would end
With no one here,
not a single friend.
(shaheen)
When I close my eyes
I see your face
and hear your voice
I got just one choice
(Heart_on_sleeve)
When in your arms
I see you
smiling brighly into my eyes
guiding me along the dance floor like waves in the ocean
A kiss from love has come and blown into your lips and has made its place there
so you wouldn't forget me
even if I disapear into thin clouds

[This message has been edited by MelBear (edited 03-31-2000).]

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

1 posted 2000-03-28 09:02 PM

If you look into my hand
You may see this gun
But if you look into this world
You'll find I'm not the only one

Lucius Cade
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 235
Saskatchewan

2 posted 2000-03-29 12:35 PM

I wish I could just live or die,
No hardships, either way I lie
The truth lies for me somewhere
Hoping my life I shall spare

Lucidity is the answer to all problems

Mellon Collie
Junior Member

since 2000-03-25

Posts 49
united states of america

3 posted 2000-03-29 02:02 AM

if you dare to probe my mind
be wary of what you may find,
for innocence when given time
may prove to be the fatal kind

--the beautiful freak--

angel6917
Member

since 2000-01-14

Posts 478
WI

4 posted 2000-03-29 10:02 AM

This life of mine
I wish would end
With no one here,
not a single friend.

MelBear
Junior Member

since 2000-03-26

Posts 29
Imlay City, Mi

5 posted 2000-03-29 03:00 PM

Wonderful you guys.It is great. Keep the lines comming.... Saturday I will accept no more lines and type up the finished one! Great Job guys!

MeLBear

"Death is not the end. Just a vaction (where you acan still see the world)from friends and family, in time they all follow you to your permanet vacation spot."

shaheen
Junior Member

since 2000-03-27

Posts 16
Denmark

6 posted 2000-03-29 06:12 PM

When I close my eyes
I see your face
and hear your voice
I got just one choice
-------------------
Every night...
in my dreams
I see you
I feel you
how can I imagine
a world without you
Love can just
touch one true time

so help me please to survive
I know there are many mistakes
but I do what I dare can
to be a better fellow man

so do you know
you are the one

"Their is an island of opprtunities in middle of every difficulty!"

heart_on_sleeve
Member

since 2000-03-29

Posts 55

7 posted 2000-03-31 12:02 PM

When in your arms
I see you
smiling brighly into my eyes
guiding me along the dance floor like waves in the ocean
A kiss from love has come and blown into your lips and has made its place there
so you wouldn't forget me
even if I disapear into thin clouds
Heart_on_sleeve

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