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JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-03-27 05:28 PM


Oh how I feel such pain,
You are my best friend,
I'm sorry I betrayed you,
But he was so charming,
You weren't together anymore,
I guess I should have givin it more time!

Oh how I feel such happiness,
You are my boyfriend,
I'm sorry about my best friend,
But I don't know what I'm doing,
You weren't together anymore,
I should have given it more time!

Oh how I feel such anger,
You should watch yourself,
You're sorry for wanting true love,
But you seeked a bit close,
They weren't together anymore,
You knew you should have given it more time!

Oh how I have betrayed you,
I should have waited longer,
I'm sorry for making you cry,
But I was so alone,
By then you weren't together anymore,
I couldn't wait any longer!
I'm sorry, so sorry for my betrayal!

~JeNnYeMeShAN~ :{


 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


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Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
1 posted 2000-03-27 11:09 PM


Are you truly SORRY?
ESP
Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-03-28 06:08 AM


What a mess! I hope you don't lose your best friend and your boyfriend. Hang in there!
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