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MelBear
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since 2000-03-26
Posts 29
Imlay City, Mi

0 posted 2000-03-27 04:46 PM


Me and My Best friend Jessica were quite bored and we are ready for summer so I wrote her this poem.

I walk down the halway
trying to listen to what you say.
I am listening to your tale
of a certain male.
However my mind is away
Dreaming of a warmer day.
Were we tan in the sun,
and have ton's of fun.
A place where like children we play.
on the sand you and I lay.
Checking out the hotties
and all the fine bodies.
Staying out late.
And playing with our fate.
Sleeping over nights
and having pillow fights.
It is my paradise.
it is so nice.
Our summer wonderland.
Okay lets go now take my hand.

© Copyright 2000 Melinda Hays - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
1 posted 2000-03-28 12:11 PM


Very well done!  Sometimes that summer wonderland seems so far away though, doesn't it?  Great work, keep it up!

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~



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