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jytree
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0 posted 2000-03-27 09:46 AM


The fall of a great man tells the story of me.
Time and time I have fell in life.
I wish to go on but my body gets weaker everyday that I live.
I need a power so rich that I can fly to the heavens without blinking one bit.
I need the jolt into my life to go on.
The only one to be able to bestoe such a power is God the father and the creator.
Day by day I go on fight with myself and every demon that wants to fight.
I am not the only one fighting in the world.
I know that.
The way I look at it is "I would rather be fighting than dying".
Everyday someone dies with no hope.
They die because they don't know how to live.
They have nothing to live for any more.
The crys of the lost reach me I hear them all them all the time.
I began to cry because I know that I am only human and can spread the word of God to one person at a time.
Each time one person gets saved and gets to go to heavens.
Twenty seven more die and go to hell.
Now can you hear them screaming" I don't want to die and go to hell someone help me show me Jesus".
This is what I hear in the crys at night.
If it was you in that place I think you would be crying too.
My life is to serve God and to do his will.
I will go on serveing God for the rest of my life.
I hope I can help to lead someone to God.



 For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

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sweetcollege_girl
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since 1999-12-03
Posts 872
just about where I want to be
1 posted 2000-03-27 09:49 AM


Great poem Jay. If you ever need a shoulder, you know where to find me. You may have to bend down a little, but it's there for ya if you need it  

your friend,

Lavada

 "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it.
For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it
For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin



ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
2 posted 2000-03-27 12:53 PM


I hope you find the power to keep on fighting. You can turn to any of us in Passions anytime, we are your extended family
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