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emptyness
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since 2000-03-09
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0 posted 2000-03-25 08:54 AM


behind stone walls i sit  and suffer
behind stone walls i cry
behind stone walls i wait and longer
behind stone walls i die

and in a thousand years my corpse will be found and the people will wounder why i didnt walk out the open door


 "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write


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pharon
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since 1999-11-13
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1 posted 2000-03-25 09:40 AM


good job!!  i'm gonna be chewing on that on for a while    
ESP
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2 posted 2000-03-26 07:43 AM


Neat poem. It will make me ponder for some time!  
Kevin
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3 posted 2000-03-26 02:52 PM


isnt it always the open doors that are the hardest to walk through, while we run full steam at the ones that are locked, great poem
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