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pharon
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since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2000-03-24 07:59 PM


Cracked and broken pieces
All strewn about the floor.
No amount of glue or stitch
Will patch this aching sore.


© Copyright 2000 maria g robinson - All Rights Reserved
anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
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Limbo
1 posted 2000-03-24 08:52 PM


Interesting...Is this in relation to a physical or mental sore?

~AF~

4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

2 posted 2000-03-25 03:13 AM


hhhhmmmm....i'd also like to know whether this is in relation to a physical or mental sore

good job

Bec

emptyness
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA
3 posted 2000-03-26 12:54 PM


it is a mental scare isnt it   i know it is
because i have felt the same way before  i hope you feel better   but a good poem anyway

 "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write


angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
4 posted 2000-03-27 09:56 AM


All these broken pieces,
a mess that you created.
I wish right now,
I was heavily sedated.

(Sorry, I had to add, since I know the feeling of hurt all too well right now.)
Good job.
~Kristi Lynn

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-03-27 12:47 PM


This is emotional right? It is very powerful. I know what hurt feels like, I have felt it many times, you will find happiness again. Just believe in yourself. Keep posting!!
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