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ezt
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since 2000-03-13
Posts 19


0 posted 2000-03-24 06:56 AM




Always holding my hand
trying to make me understand
wiping tears from my eyes
always telling the truth never lies
I do believe shes gotta be
from the City of Angels

Everytime I got something to fear
she touches me and it all disapears
she´s reculer saint
when I need somebody to talk to
she stays and talks it through
I do believe shes gotta be
from the City of Angels

I don´t care what everybody say
or what´s standing in my way
I do believe shes gotta be
from the City of Angels

Brian Eggertsen.

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anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
1 posted 2000-03-24 07:08 AM


A touching poem. Good work

~AF~

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-03-24 11:42 AM


Where is this City of Angels.  Would like to pay a visit.
Nice poem.

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
3 posted 2000-03-25 12:10 PM


I too would like to pay a visit.  Wonderful work!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~



tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
4 posted 2000-03-25 01:10 AM


A very lovely poem, I loved it.
Well done ezt
Tracie


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

5 posted 2000-03-25 03:07 AM


this is beautiful

i have a someone that i am certain is from that angelic city

well done and keep up the good work

Bec

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