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angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI

0 posted 2000-03-23 09:46 AM


I was doing so well,
until these last few days.
I've been living in my own personal hell,
and walking around in a daze.



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Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-23 11:42 AM


     Feelings that I once had
    emotions that won't let go
     this mask that I now wear
    a true face it doesn't show

Angel6917, i'm not a teen but thought I would toss in a few lines at your invitation.
Danny


DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-03-23 01:59 PM


I'm in the library now,
English class I could not take.
Of Mice and Men we're watching
The kind of movie I hate.

(Note: it is a very depressing movie)

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
3 posted 2000-03-23 04:17 PM


I want to live,
I want to die.
My heart has gone
into the night.

Nothing to be happy for,
no reason to smile.
I feel like absolutely nothing
is worth my while.

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

4 posted 2000-03-23 07:08 PM


Don't understand these ugly feelings,
That swirl around in my head.
And can't comprehend the pain inside me,
That makes me want to scream and shout.

I don't knoiw if this is what you wanted, but that's all I got  

Salma



 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
5 posted 2000-03-23 10:46 PM


Tears burn with fragile fear,
Reverie lays shattered,
Love once held so near,
Now is cold and scattered.

The blood of my soul,
Coats life in scarlet haze,
No longer do dreams grow,
Where misery now lays.


Off the top of my head.  I enjoy this kind of stuff, good idea!  


 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~



angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
6 posted 2000-03-28 04:31 PM


The tears that I cry,
even the ones you don't see,
make me realize
how sad life can be.


Mellon Collie
Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49
united states of america
7 posted 2000-03-28 04:42 PM


fear that boils in purple veins
and sorrow overwhelming thought
this flood of anger, pride and hate
rages 'gainst the peace i've sought

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
8 posted 2000-03-29 07:10 AM


Misery engulfs me, I am all alone,
and though you cannot hear it
My heart begins to moan.

I am in a dark pit of sorrow,
Trying in vain to claw my way out of
This place with no tomorrow.

If I could choose tomorrow not to wake
I would surely sleep forever.
I think my life is a big mistake.

Happiness and laughter are far off distant dreams,
Why is life this way for me,
It won't ever change it seems.

My heart has been shattered,
True love stolen away.
Since then, nothing mattered.

I am deemed to live alone I fear,
Never have a person to love.
No one in my heart to hold dear.

shaheen
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 16
Denmark
9 posted 2000-03-30 05:17 PM


That's the way life is. I know there are many mistakes. But i do what, that i can, just to help my fellow man.
So i'll be a better man today!

---------
(This one is better)

Do you really think you know me? Do you really think you know me? Do you really think I care.

Do you really think you know me?

You don't know! Sorry baby, I had to move. I had to move!
You wanna this you wanna do that. Think before doing anything!
It's up to you.

-- It's not what I'm gonna say to White-rose!

Ciao!

your sincerly
Mumba -ezt-


"Their is an island of opprtunities in middle of every difficulty!"

[This message has been edited by shaheen (edited 03-30-2000).]

jytree
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 336
omaha ark usa
10 posted 2000-03-31 09:18 AM


Why can't I Live?
Why can't I die?
Why do I have to hide these feelings inside?

I live to love
I love to live
This is a git a want to give.

Not drepression
Not sadness
This poem probually rate up there with the top badness

Drepression grips
Drepression kills
This is probually my last thrill

Sadness surrounds
Sadness destroys
I am just a boy traped inside a man's body



 For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

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