Teen Poetry #2 |
Like a shooting star |
ezt Junior Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 19 |
Like a shooting star beautiful as far as the eye can see No matter how hard I try I can´t take the first step people keep telling me say what you feel with words everytime I look at her my heart is standing still and can´t speak before she turn away My mind is going crazy cause I don´t have no clue I don´t know what to do when she´s walking bye Like a shooting star beautiful as far as the eye can see Brian Eggertsen. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Brian~ I like this poem a lot, too. It's so sweet, but yet sad at the same time. I hope to see more from you soon. Love ya, Kristi Lynn |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful work. And btw, go after her! With someone writing such beautiful poetry about her, she has a good chance of liking the person behind the poetry also! *Krista Knutson* ~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~ |
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