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ezt
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since 2000-03-13
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0 posted 2000-03-23 08:19 AM



Like a shooting star
beautiful as far
as the eye can see

No matter how hard I try
I can´t take the first step
people keep telling me
say what you feel with words

everytime I look at her
my heart is standing still
and can´t speak
before she turn away

My mind is going crazy
cause I don´t have no clue
I don´t know what to do
when she´s walking bye

Like a shooting star
beautiful as far
as the eye can see

Brian Eggertsen.

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angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
1 posted 2000-03-23 09:44 AM


Brian~
I like this poem a lot, too.
It's so sweet, but yet sad at the same time.
I hope to see more from you soon.
Love ya,
Kristi Lynn

Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
2 posted 2000-03-23 10:54 PM


Very beautiful work. And btw, go after her!  With someone writing such beautiful poetry about her, she has a good chance of liking the person behind the poetry also!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~



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