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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-03-22 04:45 PM


We were the best of friends,
then she came between us.
Its not fair, its not right,
I loved you, now I can't.

I can't even say hi,
Without her being there.
I cry for this and that,
No one really knows why.

You were the only one,
That could hug me just right.
I can't even see you,
without her being there.

Its not fair, its not right,
That I have to go on,
Without calling you "friend"


 (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)

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DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-03-22 05:41 PM


very touching poem. I like it.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-03-24 06:35 AM


Tamma
Lovely poem, I'm sure you can still be friends I just think that maybe you're still holding onto being more.
When you're able to let go of that, I think you will see that being friends can work.
LoL tracie

Easy for me to say I'm old. (Ha Ha ha)


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
3 posted 2000-03-24 06:57 AM


Believe me I know exactly where you are coming from. I had a best friend and then this little so 'n' so came in and I could never get her alone to talk to her or anything. Don't worry about it but if being friends is too hard try to let go and find someone worthy of holding onto a friendship.

~AF~

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