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JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
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Cecil, Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-03-21 06:02 PM


Dreams comes to you while you're sleep,
After you pray the lord,
your soul to keep,...



 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


© Copyright 2000 Jennifer Trejo - All Rights Reserved
DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-03-21 08:25 PM


Dreams are but illusion though,
They are never reallity,
Only our minds deepest wishes.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


Ashiraladoni
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 52
Duluth, MN, USA
2 posted 2000-03-21 08:35 PM


A dream is a thought from the soul
A yearning of freedom
A wanting of knowledge


 " To be free, or to be enslaved, that is the question."

4eva_at_heart
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

3 posted 2000-03-22 04:47 AM


Dreams our deepest desires
Desires which can be transformed into reality
if we just believe...

dazed
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since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
USA
4 posted 2000-03-22 07:25 AM


Dreams are thoughts
turned inside out,
Dreams sometimes tell us
what we're about

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
5 posted 2000-03-22 09:43 AM


Keep your dreams
from the heart,
and somehow always
make them start.

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
6 posted 2000-03-22 11:14 AM


JM, this was a good challenge to other young poets.  Hope to see more response.
Well done.

*Starry_Eyed*
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 5

7 posted 2000-03-22 01:06 PM


Dreams are some of your deepest desires
they come from the heart
heart is speaking to mind

Bert
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since 2000-03-22
Posts 11

8 posted 2000-03-22 02:42 PM


Dreams come,
dreams go,
not always to be remebered...

Bert
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since 2000-03-22
Posts 11

9 posted 2000-03-22 02:45 PM


I see dreams,
in them i never see myself,
take control of your dreams...

(in that previous reply the word remebered was suppost to be remembered)

LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
10 posted 2000-03-22 06:12 PM


Dreams, our refuge,
From daily routines
Our time to let go
Our time to be free.

Once the sun
Sets o'er your eyes
Sweet dreams shall dance
Untill its rise.

rachella
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 39
Indiana
11 posted 2000-03-22 10:13 PM


Dreams are answers given during the night,
from the questions we've asked during the day.

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
12 posted 2000-03-23 03:47 PM


I'm sending this to the top again hopeing that more young poets respond. More dreams please.

 A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
13 posted 2000-03-23 07:10 PM


thankx danny for your help.

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850
In the space between moments
14 posted 2000-03-23 10:50 PM


Dreams are the spirit's words,
Woven among threads of light.
Among the angels, softly heard,
And gazed upon with delight.



 *Krista Knutson*

~*Only when trudging through the soul's darkest midnight can one truly appreciate the glory of the sunrise*~



LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
15 posted 2000-03-24 07:03 PM


        *Bump*
anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797
Limbo
16 posted 2000-03-24 08:58 PM


Dreams light the way,
For your soul to walk.
Throughout the good and the bad,
Allowing your innerself to talk.

Mel~
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 16
Gosford, New South Wales, Australia
17 posted 2000-03-25 12:28 PM


A dream is like an adventure in your sleep.
A different world into which no-one can peep.
A dream is like a diary where you share
All your hopes, fears and cares.

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
18 posted 2000-03-25 05:51 PM


This is a great idea and I too am sending it back to the top.  

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

Bert
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since 2000-03-22
Posts 11

19 posted 2000-03-25 06:00 PM


Dreams, some sort of optical illusion.
When in a dream check for the time,
if you don't get any  
"this is a dream" should be your conclusion.

(trust me this works, if you'r dreaming and you'r not sure whether it's a dream or not, just look for a watch somewhere in the dream and if you can't see the arm of the watch move, then it is a dream)


LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
20 posted 2000-03-25 10:53 PM


As the dreamer
Wakes each morn
He fears not danger,
Tears or scorn

His time shall come
To dream, to fly
As twinkling stars
Carress the sky

 *There is no destination where we are
Please take me somewhere far
Far away from this world of mine*
(by me)


Mellon Collie
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since 2000-03-25
Posts 49
united states of america
21 posted 2000-03-26 02:12 AM


forgotten dream is all you are
and all you'll ever be.
no one dreams that doesn't wake
nor wakes that doesn't sleep.

and since a dream is all you are
and dreams are all a fake,
i bid you lay your head to rest
and sleep no more to wake.

sincerely,
the beautiful freak

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
22 posted 2000-03-26 07:24 AM


Hold fast to dreams
Never let them go,
Or your life will become barren
And what you could be you will never know.

Dreams are the guiding light of many a heart.
If you have dreams for your life,
You have made a good start.
Without them, comes trouble and strife.

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
23 posted 2000-03-31 03:25 PM


This was such a nice challenge, I'm sending it back to the top for more reading.
What better subject than Dreams????  The responses so far have been fantastic.  Good writing everyone!!!

bulletproof2312
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since 2000-03-31
Posts 28
Beaumont Tx, 77707
24 posted 2000-03-31 07:29 PM


Always a result of the days' turns
Or thoughts of tomarrows yet yearned

Mind and soul pored into action
Yet of your strenght takes only a fraction..

*peace always*



 "Here I stand I can do no other"---Luther

heart_on_sleeve
Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 55

25 posted 2000-03-31 07:39 PM


Let your weeping head rest to sleep
and dream of dreams that bring you to rest
Of these visions you see friends
and some enimies
but after the scream and the sudden wake
its good to realize that it was all in your head.

JennyeMeshan
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
26 posted 2000-04-03 09:09 AM


Wake up with the morning light,
Blue cool sky,
This is a beautiful sight,
Let it Fly.

~JennyeMeshan    

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


jytree
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 336
omaha ark usa
27 posted 2000-04-03 09:29 AM


Dreams are fun
Dreams are sad
Not all dreams are bad

Dreams can teach
Dreams can Lie
This is true for what I feel inside

Dreams are my home
Dreams ae my place
I live alone and will die alnow this is what I face

Some dreams are pure
Some dreams are not
Some dreams can make you feel like a flop

(I guess I got bored so I decided to add on and your welcome thank you for letting me doing it)


 For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

foxy_16
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since 1999-11-21
Posts 31
Lake Lillian, MN, USA
28 posted 2000-04-04 01:22 AM


Dreams are only that- Dreams
But reality, paved by dreams,
will set us free
So let the dreams continue
As they lead us through it all

SweetAznAngel
Junior Member
since 2000-04-04
Posts 13
Boston, Mass. USA
29 posted 2000-04-04 10:45 PM


Dreams allow minds to imagine
To spread imagination
To let the heart reach it’s every desire
To let the brain spread creativity
To make good out of what is bad
To make sense out of reality
To let individuals be themselves
To tell ourselves not to shy away from our true personalities


 *The best kind of friend is the kind you can sit on a porch, swing with, never say a word, and then walk away feeling like it was the best conversation you've ever had.*
[The essence of romanticism is the ability to wonder and to reflect. In searching the meaning of the known, the human spirit reaches for the unknown, in trying to understand the present it looks to the past and to the future.]

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