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Chico
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since 2000-02-10
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0 posted 2000-03-20 09:40 PM



I'ts not right !!

It's not right !
  I'ts not fair.
That I have to fight.
  to breath for air...
Why is it light,
  When you are there?
Then it turns dark as night.
  to dark to bear.

How can you say goodnight,
  without a trace of care?
Leacing me alone in fright..
  That your dreams I'll never share.
Why do you get a green light.
  And get to go everywhere?
Whe I get a red light,
  And can't go anywhere?
You get to go left and right,
  Or anywhere you dare...
But I have to follow my headlight.
  And stay on the throughfare.

I'ts just not right.
  I want to Tell you I care.
But I'm afraid I might.
  Just get a glare...
So I'll just stay out of sight,
  and sit here and stare.
Hoping some day god might.
  Answer my prayer...



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Crystalina123
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

1 posted 2000-03-21 04:48 PM


I really like this poem. Beautiful

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.

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2 posted 2000-03-21 08:19 PM


"its not right, its not fair what your missing over there" ahhh my favorite part of my favorit song  

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