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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-03-20 03:56 PM


Scars on my wrist,
Blood on my hand.

Death tries to engulf me,
Theres not much I can do.

A razor blade just sits there,
Inches away from my grasp.

Unable to let him know,
How much I care for him.

Unsure about how he feels,
He barely even knows me.

Tell me is there anyway,
That he could possibly care?

(if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)


[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 03-20-2000).]

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Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
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1 posted 2000-03-20 04:28 PM


This is as dark as it gets.  Hope your just writing.  I certainly don't want to think that someone you barely know is causing such drastic reactions.
e-mail on the way.

DragonFang
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2 posted 2000-03-20 05:07 PM


oh wow, I do hope that you are writing form someone elses POV, cuase I would hate to see such a nice person and great poet such as yourself be in such pain like that. Well, if you ever need to talk I'd be more than happy to listen.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV
3 posted 2000-03-21 08:40 PM


Sadly, this is my own POV

 (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)

DragonFang
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4 posted 2000-03-22 12:30 PM


Well, if you EVER need someone to talk to, I'm more than happy to listen. That is, after all, what I do best. So don't be shy about sending me your problems.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
5 posted 2000-03-22 04:41 AM


Tamma
I read
I sighed
I replied
DON'T DO IT GIRL!
It's not worth it and you've got your whole life ahead of you.
Look up and reach those stars and don't look back.
tracie
thats what I want to see


 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks

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