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Teen Poetry #2

The God you give.....

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-03-20 02:24 AM

where did you get those empty eyes
i have to know
so i can get a pair of my own
and what do you do with broken lies
im curious..curious to the bone
some say the god you own
is the god you give
show me the lesson here
there IS more to life than just fear.....
for me the need is always just to disappear...

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2000-03-20 03:08 AM

This poem is interesting. You have described feelings here that I constantly feel and you have done it well. it is like a riddle that people can relate to. Good work.

~AF~

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