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eagle
Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39
singapore

0 posted 2000-03-19 08:14 AM


In the darkest parts of my life
when the sun refuses to shine,
I look back
and always find one face,
which comforts me,
One smile
which gives me courage,
One childish laughter
which lifts my spirits,
and gives me hope for each new day.

I must have known you all my life
and as children
we didin't really like each other,
I mean,
I was a boy
You was a girl...

But I guess life has funny habbits
making people change as they grow.
I'll like to think it was mutual,
you liking me,
me liking you,
and yet we didn't have to say this.

I've told you what a majestic smile you have,
but do you know that I admire your heavenly voice?
Or that I can get lost in your eyes?
Do you know that I've never seen a prettier shade of pink,
than the one of your cheeks when you blush?
Or how a tear from you would break my heart?
You're so nice, even if you sulk, I'll be laughing
and then you'll be laughing too.
I just hope i'm not dreaming,
I just hope you won't leave.

Maybe I'm just unworthy
cause that's how I feel.
God must know that too,
so he's finding someone worthy of who you are.
Then, like always, I'll hide in my shadows
looking back,
to that smile,
that face,
and I'll cry.

But dare I hope that we'll be together?
Put my trust in God's perfect timing?
I hope, yes I do,
with all my heart and all my soul,
I hope with the little hope a sinner has.
And I'll wait,
to once again get lost in your eyes.


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LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-03-19 04:30 PM


Wow, this is just beautiful. You convey your emotions so well through your words, I feel like I've had a glimpse at your heart. Hopefully she'll see what an honest heart you have, and return your feelings.
eagle
Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39
singapore
2 posted 2000-03-21 07:54 AM


Thanks. I hope so too.  
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