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Drums of War!
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Drums of War! |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
The great drums sound Harbringers of war. "Boom! Doom!" And legions march, Their soldiers sore. "Boom! Doom!" The battle rages To the sound of drums. "Boom! Doom!" Soldiers die. A deserter runs. "Boom! Doom!" Arrows fly More men die. "Boom! Doom!" Me and my friend were in the band room after school today, this sounded really good with a base drum rather than just saying "Boom! Doom!" "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
I liked this one, too. It was "cute." Keep it up!  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I don't know DragonFang....I think the *BOOM DOOM* is ingenious! <lol> Neat idea. Peace out!! [This message has been edited by LyricFetish (edited 03-19-2000).] |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Sam~ I liked this poem, it was interesting. Definately a different way of creating a poem. ~Kristi Lynn |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
OOPS! I'm getting good at messing my little postings up, huh? [This message has been edited by angel6917 (edited 03-21-2000).] |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
shame angel double poasting(sp?) good poem dragon fang i agree with Lyric th boom doom is really cool "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I still say it sounds better with a real drum, two actualy, a deep one and a deeper one. |
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