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DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2000-03-17 08:24 PM


I wrote this today for someone . . .

You are my day,
You are my night,
My sky and clouds above.

You are my sun,
You are my moon,
My stars so high overhead.

You are my mountains,
You are my vallies,
My sunrise that brings me joy.

You are my angel,
You are my life,
My shinning ray of light.

You are my happiness,
You are my love,
My one and only you.


 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


© Copyright 2000 Samson C. Justice - All Rights Reserved
Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
1 posted 2000-03-18 04:31 PM


I like this one, alot. It was very sweet. I am adding it to my "poem book." Keep up the good work!  

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-03-20 12:17 PM


bump!  


 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
3 posted 2000-03-20 04:01 PM


Sam~
I read this one earlier today,
but my computer was being a pain,
so I couldn't reply until now.  
Sorry!
Anyhoo, I love this,
it's sooooooooo sweet!  
Who'd you write it for???
Just wondering...
Good job, sweetie!
Love ya,
Kristi Lynn

DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
4 posted 2000-03-20 05:10 PM


Kristi Kristi, always so sweet,
It isn't so hard, just be neat.
Whenever you speak, whenever you talk
Whenever you running or moving at a walk.
Speak with the heart, twist the lines,
And there you have, a poet's ryme.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
5 posted 2000-03-21 09:47 AM


Sam~
Another little sweet poem.
Thank you, sweetie.
But, like I asked before,
who did you write the original poem for?

Love ya,
Kristi Lynn

DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
6 posted 2000-03-22 12:38 PM


ho hum... Well, I'll explain all about that in a mail tommarow if 1) I remember, 2) I get the chance to check my mail, senior theses are due tommarow, so all seniors who are not skipping will be printing their papers (lazzy bums they are) 3) I'm not on another sugar high like I was today (not sure what that has to do with anything, but I'm sure it does) 4) You remind me, who are you again???   j/k  

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


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