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angel6917
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0 posted 2000-03-17 02:27 PM


I smile when I'm happy,
I smile when I'm sad,
I smile when I'm jealous,
I smile when I'm mad.

I smile to cover my pain,
I smile to cover my tears.
I smile to cover my hurt,
I smile to cover my tears.

I smile so you don't worry,
I smile so you don't see me.
I smile so you don't freak out,
I smile so you can be free.

~Kristi Lynn

© Copyright 2000 Kristi Stanczak - All Rights Reserved
DragonFang
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1 posted 2000-03-17 03:50 PM


*smiles*
But you should let your friends help you with your pain. That is what friends are there for. Anywho, nice poem there Kristi.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


angel6917
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2 posted 2000-03-17 04:15 PM


Sam~
You know that there's always a reason I don't have my friends help me with my problems.  
I don't want to burden them, for one.
I've had so much happen since I started coming to Passions,
and I felt like more of a burden than anything when I said how I felt...
Thank you for listening, Sam.
~Kristi Lynn

DragonFang
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3 posted 2000-03-17 04:51 PM


Well I for one have never found my friend's problems a burden, and even if I did, it would be a burden that I would be happy to carry. As for listening, that is what I do best.

Samson C.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


Singer1981
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4 posted 2000-03-17 04:56 PM


Kristi,
    AS always...i'm here for you if you need to talk.  Great poem as usual.  
~Sarah

Salooma
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5 posted 2000-03-18 06:18 PM


Very nice poem....great work....but sometimes it's when you cry that you let it all out. I'm here if you need to talk. Good luck!

Salma

 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

angel6917
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6 posted 2000-03-20 09:48 AM


Thanks all for your replies.
Sam~
Thank you soooooo much!
Listening is what I do best, too,
so if you ever need someone,
I'm right here...
Sarah and Salma~
Thanks much!  
It means a lot.
~Kristi Lynn

angel6917
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7 posted 2000-03-23 09:52 AM


*BUMP*

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