Teen Poetry #2 |
As time goes by |
ezt Junior Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 19 |
As time goes by I`m waiting for a sign to show me the way I am just so blue what am I to say what am I to do As time goes by think of you wonder why I couldn´t keep it together everyday I hear your name and now I know that love is not a game As time goes by I´m going outta my mind as time goes by just wanna know why as time goes by I can´t lay the pain behind As time goes by think of you wonder why I couldn´t keep it together maybe cause I´m shy everyday I hear your name I don´t know what to do but now I know that I`ve been a fooool... |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
OHhhhhh, I like. Well, I like almost all poetry, but this is a very nice poem ezt. I really like the way you really get the frustration of waiting into the poem. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Hey, ezt, I really like this poem. I know what it feels like to wait. I was doing the same, waiting for someone when I first came to Passions. It didn't work, but now I've found someone I love sooooo much! I wish you luck with the same. ~Kristi Lynn |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
One very wise line that you wrote "love is not a game". Never truer words spoken. |
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