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ezt
Junior Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 19


0 posted 2000-03-17 07:11 AM




As time goes by
I`m waiting for a sign
to show me the way
I am just so blue
what am I to say
what am I to do

As time goes by
think of you wonder why
I couldn´t keep it together
everyday I hear your name
and now I know that
love is not a game

As time goes by
I´m going outta my mind
as time goes by
just wanna know why
as time goes by
I can´t lay the pain behind

As time goes by
think of you wonder why
I couldn´t keep it together
maybe cause I´m shy
everyday I hear your name
I don´t know what to do
but now I know that
I`ve been a fooool...


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DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-03-17 08:47 AM


OHhhhhh, I like. Well, I like almost all poetry, but this is a very nice poem ezt. I really like the way you really get the frustration of waiting into the poem.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
2 posted 2000-03-17 02:32 PM


Hey, ezt, I really like this poem.
I know what it feels like to wait.
I was doing the same,
waiting for someone when I first came to Passions.
It didn't work,
but now I've found someone I love sooooo much!
I wish you luck with the same.
~Kristi Lynn

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
3 posted 2000-03-18 11:41 AM


One very wise line that you wrote "love is not a game".  Never truer words spoken.
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