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Shallow little light....
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
is it me or is it miserable sitting in the dark with my life turned off again its irresistable...a pure delight to bother.. to pester.. you basking and bathing in your good for nothing shallow little light... |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Ok, this is different! Think you conveyed a message here to someone. Actually, I like it. Curious about what you mean by "my life turned off again". Just wondering.... |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
this is cool, i imagine someone sitting under a window just before dusk having anargument with themselves. Sort of wallowing in self pitty kinda thing. And the idea of you not being sure if you are you or miserable is good. I like "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it." Henry David Thoreau Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Hmmm... very nice poem here. Interesting, though, that you might sit and wonder if it is you or miserable. Hell, I like it. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I really liked this one, it's deeply intriguing, and I get the feeling that there's more to this than you are saying, like you chose to share enough to catch my interest but I can't see the full picture. Nice affect. *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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