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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
Im so angry at you and you deserve all my rage all my hate times two and its not just a stage Im so angry at you and you are the source of my anger this feeling isnt new it might be our fate Im so angry at you or am i angry at me what did i do i am so sorry<!signature--> <font face="Arial, Verdana" size="1" color="#000080"> "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write </font> [This message has been edited by emptyness (edited 03-16-2000).] |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I like this poem, and can definately relate. Keep up the good work. ~Kristi Lynn |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
wow that's a real good poem....it suddenly turns on you at the end unexpectedly....very nice  Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
Your title is certainly appropriate. I can see what you are conveying through this poem and I think you've done a wonderful job of it. This is one of those that says it all and leaves nothing out. I like. *There is no destination where we are Please take me somewhere far Far away from this world of mine* (by me) |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
very well written! good job |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
very good!!! i agree with Lyric fetish..the title is very appropriate just.....i know i shouldn't do this....but i do...i always direct my anger at someone who has nothing to do with it.  Bec |
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