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*Nene*
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since 2000-03-15
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0 posted 2000-03-15 06:06 PM


Have you ever felt like a floating cloud?
Wandering across the endless sky
Alone up so high, apart from the rest
Looking down at the world, a green and blue mess

Have you ever felt like a bird in flight?
Looking for something in the dark, lonely night
Something of which you have no clue
But knowing that something is looking too

Have you ever felt as used as a ball?
Bounced and shot to the goal on the wall
Helping someone else win their fame
And you have no choice but to play the game

Have you ever felt like a new teddy bear
Given to someone from someone who cares
Being hugged and kept close, never out of sight
Loving the attention, oblivious to spite

Have you ever loved someone so bad
That the thought of not seeing them made you sad
And the thought of not talking fills your head
You dream all day and when you go to bed

Have you ever been so confused
And not know what to do
You tried to reason, you tried to think
And all that still left you without a clue

I have
And so have you


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Elilas
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since 2000-03-15
Posts 20
The Dalles, Oregon, USA
1 posted 2000-03-15 06:24 PM


Great cuz I know what it's like to be so confused that you don't know what your confused about  LOL
Alwye
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2 posted 2000-03-15 10:11 PM


Exellent, well thought out work!  Welcome to Passions, we're glad to have you!  

 *Krista Knutson*

I do this so this world will know that it will not change me....-GB


dazed
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since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
USA
3 posted 2000-03-15 10:29 PM


I think that poem was awesome
I will be looking forward to reading more of your work!!
Dana

LoveBug
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4 posted 2000-03-15 10:39 PM


This is a great poem! Keep up the good work!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

Crystalina123
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

5 posted 2000-03-16 09:15 AM


First off, welcome to Passsions! Second off, I love the poem and look forward to seeing more of your work, I can really identify!

 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.

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