Teen Poetry #2 |
All These Tears |
angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
I have all these tears hiding behind my eyes, trying to force their way onto my face. Nothing has been better for me before, but yet a part of me wants to let tears flow. I've never been happier, never more in love, but yet there's something not quite right. I feel these tears burning, and though I try my best to keep them hidden, the dam holding them back breaks. I wish I knew what it is that's making me cry, but I wish it would stop, because I don't like all these tears. ~Kristi Lynn |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Sounds like your heart knows something that you head doesn't. Two opposing forces at work causing that tear surge, I suspect. "but yet, there's something not quite right". That something is probably unequal committment to the relationship. Just gazing into my foggy crystal ball here LOL. Hope it gets better. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
*sniff* I know how you feel. Your eyes just seem to want to cry, And yet your mind dosn't know why. I have been so sad before, To me, crying was something to deplore. But it felt so good to let it out, To talk to a friend who was about. But as always, we are here for ya. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Thank you both for your comments. DrangonFang~ cute little poem you added. E-mail me, huh? ~Kristi Lynn |
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dazed Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119USA |
Very sad but good work!! Maybe you just need to cry and then the urge will go away... Dana |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
lately i have been crying non stop...but i am so happy....happier than i have ever been before. i think it is relief. relief that i have finally found a special someone, and to them i am special too perhaps Danny is right here...but on the other hand it could be because you are over happy and the feeling is unknown to you whatever you find it to be...good luck keep up the excellent poetry Bec |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Dana and Bec~ Thank you both for replying. I think you both may be right about the whole crying thing. Being this happy is new to me, and it scares me, strange as it sounds. But I don't think it has anything to do with something bad in my new relationship. Everything in that department is all good. ~Kristi Lynn |
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