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DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2000-03-15 02:52 AM


This poem I wrote this morning for a friend I was talking to. She needed some cheering up. I wrote this for her, and it seemed to work. I hope it cheers you all up too. Also, I had to take out her name in a couple of places.


Sing to the rising sun,
And say fair well to the falling moon.
For a new day comes,
A new day, a new chance a new hope.

Today is a day for new beginnings,
Say goodbye to old misgivings,
Goodbye to past mistakes,
For today is a newday,
And the future is what WE make it.


 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


© Copyright 2000 Samson C. Justice - All Rights Reserved
dazed
Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
USA
1 posted 2000-03-15 02:59 AM


great poem dragonfang!!
and morning to you i was already cheery though hehehehe
Dana

4eva_at_heart
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

2 posted 2000-03-15 05:40 AM


ah! to start anew

heaps good! lol

Bec

angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
3 posted 2000-03-15 09:39 AM


I like your poem,
but there's still nothing
good about mornings.  
It's all good if I could
just wake up after 10,
but with school it's 6:30-7:00...
Icky...
Wake me up this afternoon......
Oh, sorry DragonFang!  
I'm one of those cranky
people in the morning!

Love ya,
Kristi Lynn

Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
4 posted 2000-03-15 11:19 AM


Bravo, I like your attitude and outlook.  This is good advice for many who read and write in this forum.



[This message has been edited by Danny Holloway (edited 03-15-2000).]

Ashiraladoni
Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 52
Duluth, MN, USA
5 posted 2000-03-15 11:23 AM


Great Poem! I love it! And a good morning to you too!!
~Ashiraladoni

 " To be free, or to be enslaved, that is the question."

DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
6 posted 2000-03-15 12:12 PM


Krista, I hate mornings too, but they do represent new beginnings, and truth be told it was 12:30 AM when I wrote it and hadn't gone to sleep yet  

To everyone else; thanks, I'm so glad you like it. I can but try to write poems that will be enjoyed.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


angel6917
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
7 posted 2000-03-15 01:19 PM


I realize that mornings
may represent new beginnings,
but being the person I am,
a new beginning doesn't
start for me until I've been
awake for at least 2 hours.
I do see your point,
don't get me wrong there...
Love ya,
Kristi Lynn

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