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DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2000-03-15 12:05 PM


okay, a little note, i don't know what the hell i was doing or thinking when i wrote this. it is a little odd.

Fire on water,
Water on ice,
Ice on land,
Land under sky,
Sky in clouds,
Clouds of heaven,
Heaven and Earth,
Earth be known,
For now and forever
the elements here,
Shall endevor forever.


 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


© Copyright 2000 Samson C. Justice - All Rights Reserved
dazed
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since 2000-03-13
Posts 119
USA
1 posted 2000-03-15 12:47 PM


WOW I love it!!!
I dont think its weird I think its creative!!!

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
2 posted 2000-03-15 10:11 AM


I love it!
It's creative,
and it's like,
WOW!
~Kristi Lynn

DragonFang
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
3 posted 2000-03-15 12:33 PM


well.... at least it is liked. I still think it odd, but hell, if you like it, who am I to call it odd?

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
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4 posted 2000-03-15 01:14 PM


It is well liked, so you can't call it odd-
Only I can...  J/K!
~Kristi Lynn

pharon
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since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
alabama
5 posted 2000-03-15 05:43 PM


good job on this one, just like every other one    it's not odd at all, but even still, odd poetry is cool  
emptyness
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since 2000-03-09
Posts 95
mobile,Ala,USA
6 posted 2000-03-15 11:00 PM


this was really cool  i dont think i could have ever come up with anything remotly like it  good job

 "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write


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