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To Be Free or To Be Enslaved
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To Be Free or To Be Enslaved |
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Ashiraladoni Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 52Duluth, MN, USA |
To be free or to be enslaved, that is my question. Will no one answer? Will I have to be in turmoil with this burning question for all of eternity? Will I not be able to love? Or will I wander the Earth a lonely mass of passion and desire? Or will I be enslaved in a great mistake and bear the consequences of all that comes with that big mistake. I don't want to live with a mistake that could have been prevented, but yet I don't want to be alone either. Can any one understand my frustration?? To be free or to be enslaved, that is my question. Where is the answer? I love, I desire, I hope, I dream, I cry, I hurt. Can't I be satisfied with the greatest treasure on Earth? I don't want to walk this Earth alone! But the fear of commitment is great, but the pain of being alone is greater. To be free or to be enslaved, that is my question. Will no one answer? " To be free, or to be enslaved, that is the question." |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
be free ashiraladoni and join the rest of us "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
There are no guarantees or promises that our lives will be without disappointments and frustrations. Challenges will always be there to be surmounted. Strength of courage and spirit will lead you on the best path for yourself. Trust yourself and believe that you will be happy. (I gave this same advice to my daughter as she ventured out into the uncertain world) Enjoyed reading this piece you wrote. |
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