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The protector |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Who am I you ask? I will tell you. Look at me what do you see? Do you see the scrars from the battles? Do you see the blood flow from my wounds? Do you see a man or beast or angel fighting for you? If not look closer. Find my heart and look in it and tell me what you see. If I am not fight for you women that cannot fight for theirself then I am just waisting my time. For you see I am the protector. From generation to generation this bond has been handed down to a worthy man. A strong man with a loving heart. This is where I come in because I have been handed the sword of women's justice to strike down all players. I know what women go through when men use them and then toss them away. I see you when you do thatto them because I am hiding in the shadows waiting to strike you down for you sins against them. Women fear me and I do not understand why. I fight for them and still they run. Then I got hurt by a girl. So then I gave up and a curse was placed opon me. It was hte curse of a broken heart. A fallen warrior for all time. I don't think so!!. A angel came to me and removed the curse and I awoke again. For you see under the curse I became what I fought. A player!!. So finally the curse has been broken and with a scream of fury and rage a begane my quest again. So now I am alive and hunting the unjust to strike the down with vingence this time I fight for love and for justice. Players beware for I am watching you hiding in the shadow ready to strike you down be forwarned treat a woman right or. face my wrath!!! The Phamtom Poet Michael Jay Vaughn |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Good job. It had a very midevil sound and style to it. "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Thanks Jer always a pleasure to hear form a modrator about my work The Phamtom Poet Michael Jay Vaughn |
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emptyness Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 95mobile,Ala,USA |
very cool i liked it a lot keep it up ill be looking for more of you "scribere iussit amor" love commanded me to write |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Another very good poem, which seemed to be another right from the heart. I look forward to more from you. ~Kristi Lynn |
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